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Not Flesh

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Not Flesh


He wants to paint the virgin with skin blue
as a stillborn child, as blue as his wife's eyes.
Around their cot, in the earth, their seven babes
wait in line for the opening of the sky. Christ
will come back, the priest intones. But this time,
he will not enter through a woman's flesh.
How would he paint a Christ not flesh
the painter wonders? Will he be stone, the bitten skin
of a plum, a fly's wings, threadbare flaxen cloth,
or a white canvas, so white,
there's no air to breathe?
"Blue skin," the painter thinks,
Mary's face pooling beneath his brush.
An angel caresses his back until feathers fret
and knot beneath his skin, wanting out.
A poem and an icon painter, angels, transformation and seven graves and Mary.
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TheDarkenedBride's avatar
I read your poem several times and liked it very much :clap: you did a good job on this one :nod:

what made me stop and think was the line "...or a white canvas, so white..." :hmm: there were two whites and in my opinion if one of them was replaced with another word, it would help :) I would suggest either "...or a clear canvas, so white..." or "...or a white canvas, so bright (radiant etc.)..." :lightbulb:

I see this poem is a part of a series, is the rest in your gallery yet? I'd be interested in reading it :)